Hey! Believe me, I LOVE all of your surprises, so don't even THINK that I have to be some kind of judge of your works before you post them!

I think you've done an absolutely wonderful job of setting up Loric as a major "hero" character to be used in your story universe - there's an excellent mix of mystery, foreshadowing, intrigue, the whole works! With his superhuman capabilities and the mysterious benefactor, he's in the perfect position to tackle pretty much anything in any number of interesting ways. I'm looking forward to how you will develop your new world more than ever now, with such a creative beginning!

Oh, I also really enjoyed that little clip in your scraps section of the collaborative work between you and peptic_pineapple. I think it is great that you are working with others on more projects and I'm most definitely anxious to see what you come up with!

Keep up the incredibly amazing work!